Anything I can do.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Debby :)
It wasn't the happy morning. I woke up late again. I feel worried about when I go to the university again. I set a timetable early for doing other things what I want to do. If I can't fix my sleeping habit, I won't take a class on time in the university, and the class with you, too. The sleeping always distressed me for getting to school or movie theater(I book a ticket in the morining as possible as I can, becasue it's cheeper.) on time. Of course it is to me again.
I really want to be a "morining person" for the future. But you know, it is really hard particularly to me. Is it a kind of matter of my will?
Anyway, I hope I can see you tommorow.
Take care. :D
<Essay>
I guess it's a speaking skill in English. I started this since an year ago. And I feel great about it was really helpful for me to speak more fluently than before. Of course I'm not good at dialogue yet, but I can feel it is getting better and better when the time goes passes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for making time to write me novels!
hahahahahaha.. You can really make long paragraphs now! ^^
Sleeping paterns are important. Your body clock might change
and it might cause problems for you when you go back to
your classes. hahahahaha
If you can use mobile then my class can be your alarm clock!^^
Anyways, yes your speaking is getting better with your confidence!^^
Keep it up!
Take care!^^
T.Debby
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello Debby :)It wasn\'t the happy morning. I woke up late again.
>> It wasn\'t a happy morning. I woke up late again. I feel worried about when I go to the university again.
>> I feel worried about going back to the university again. I set a timetable early for doing other things what I want to do.
>>I set a timetable early for doing other things that I want to do.
If I can\'t fix my sleeping habit, I won\'t take a class on time in the university, and the class with you, too.
>> If I can\'t fix my sleeping habit, I won\'t take my class on time in the university, and the class with you, too.
The sleeping always distressed me for getting to school or movie theater(I book a ticket in the morining as possible as I can, becasue it\'s cheeper.) on time.
>> The sleeping always distresses me for getting to school or to a movie theater(I book a ticket early in the morning as possible as I can, because it\'s cheaper) on time. Of course it is to me again.>> Of course it is because of me again.I really want to be a \"morining person\" for the future.
>> I really want to be a \"morning person\" for the future. But you know, it is really hard particularly to me.
>> But you know, it is really hard particularly for me. Is it a kind of matter of my will?
>> Is it a kind of my will of the matter.
Anyway, I hope I can see you tommorow.Take care. :D>> I will catch you tomorrow!
Take care!<Essay>I guess it\'s a speaking skill in English.
>> CORRECT
>> I guess it\'s speaking English as a skillI started this since an year ago.
>> CORRECT
Or> I had it since a year ago. And I feel great about it was really helpful for me to speak more fluently than before.
>> And I feel great about it and it was really helpful for me to speak more fluently than before. Of course I\'m not good at dialogue yet, but I can feel it is getting better and better when the time goes passes.
>> Of course I\'m not good at dialogues yet, but I can feel it is getting better and better as the time goes by.
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