Anything I want
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve been thinking for a long time about what I want to buy.
The bottom line is that I don\'t have anything I want.
So, I want to say two things I wish for. I\'m sorry to say what I wish for.
I hope my parents are healthy and live long.
And I hope my family is happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I always wish the best for you.
I always wish the best for you.
I hope you have a great new year.
Come back strong and energized next year!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'ve been thinking for a long time about what I want to buy.
>> Correct
The bottom line is that I don\'t have anything I want.
The bottom line is that I don\'t have anything I want.
>> The bottom line is that there isn\'t anything I want.
So, I want to say two things I wish for.
So, I want to say two things I wish for.
>> So, I want to talk about two things I wish for.
I\'m sorry to say what I wish for.
>> I\'m hesitant to say what I wish for.
I hope my parents are healthy and live long.
I hope my parents are healthy and live long.
>> I hope my parents would be healthy and they would live long.
And I hope my family is happy.
And I hope my family is happy.
>> I also hope that my family would be happy.
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