Apart from the obvious reason of winning money, why do people gamble?
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Hello!
Most people with gambling problems say they lost control over how much time and money they spend gambling. Gambling cause a lot of family problem as you may know so I hope you won\'t ever try it.
~T. Kelly
Personally, there is two reasons why people gamble.
>> Personally I think there are two reasons why people gamble.
First reason is that people expect to win money again and again. Even though peole lose lots of money, they delude themselves.
>> The first reason is that people expect to win money again and again even though people lose lots of money, they delude themselves.
OR>> First, people expect to win again and again although in reality they lose a lot of money instead..
Second reason is that they are addicted by gambling. This is because they can not control themselves.
>> The second reason is that they are addicted to gambling. This is because they cannot control themselves.
As a result, for these reasons, people do gambling.
>> As a result, people gamble.
OR>> For these reasons, people gamble.
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