Apart from the obvious reason of winning money, why do people gamble?
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Hi Su ^^
It looks like people doing it just for fun.
>>> It seems like people are doing it for fun.
But there are more scientific reason about why people find enjoyment in gambling.
>>> correct
The most reasonable why is : Gambling is intermittent rewards.
>>> The most reasonable why is: gambling is an intermittent reward.
Follow some research about games, people have fun when they can not get the rewards at once.
>>> Follow some research about games, people have fun when they cannot get the rewards at once.
If the game is too hard to get some point, it would be hard.
>>> If the game is too hard to earn points, it would be hard.
On the other hand, when the game is too easy, they lost their appetite.
>>> On the other hand, when the game is too easy they loose their appetite.
But with the intermittent rewards, the researcher could get a remarkable consequence in this research.
>>> correct
It is like a playing with the children.
>>> It is like playing with children.
If we treat them too easily, then they lose their urge.
>>> correct
If we suggest too diffcult game, they also can not find any interest.
>>> If we let them play difficult games, sometimes they loose their interest too.
The same rule is also valid for gambling.
>>> correct
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