Apart from your city and Seoul, which city do you think is the best in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because Buyeo is the capital of Baekje which I like and Korean traditional city.
I want to go there but I have not went.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jimmy!
Here\'s your revised composition from Monday\'s homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as \"one day\" or \"someday\". See you again tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Apart from your city and Seoul, which city do you think is the best in Korea?
I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because Buyeo is the capital of Baekje which I like and Korean traditional city.
>> I think Buyeo is the best city in Korea apart from my city and Seoul because it is the capital of Baekje which I like, and a Korean traditional city.
I want to go there but I have not went.
>> I want to go there one day.
>> OR: I have not gone there yet, but I want to visit the place someday.
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