apartment investment

2020-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I will go to see my senior. We worked in the same office 2 years ago. I resigned because of vice president. He was same. I need advise of business . I will ask him that. I will meet my customer at 6PM. He work Lina life insurance that is Global company. He is very smart man. He is 43 years old and has about 10 apartment. He is apartment investor . I have started apartment investment 2 month ago. I bought apartment in wonju city. and I am considerring to buy other apartment. actually I don`t know apartment investment. my friend is investor. He is my teatcher. he explain why buy apartment. and then I consider something. but I don`t know why but it. I bought wonju apartment because he bought one.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. It\'s good that you have someone knowledgeable about investing to ask and consult. Real estate investment is a good thing.

- T. Beth

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I will go to see my senior.

>>> I will go see my senior.

We worked in the same office 2 years ago.

>>> correct

I resigned because of vice president.

>>> I resigned because of the vice president.

He was same.

>>> He did the same thing.

>>> OR: So did he.
I need advise of business .

>>> I need an advise on business.

I will ask him that.

>>> correct

>>> OR: I will ask him about that.
I will meet my customer at 6PM.

>>> correct
He work Lina life insurance that is Global company.

>>> He works in Lina Life Insurance which is a global company.
He is very smart man.

>>> He is a very smart man.

He is 43 years old and has about 10 apartment.

>>> He is 43 years old and has about 10 apartments.

>>> OR: He is 43 years old and has about 10 apartments.

He is apartment investor .

>>> He is an apartment investor.

I have started apartment investment 2 month ago.

>>> I have started apartment investment 2 months ago.

I bought apartment in wonju city. and I am considerring to buy other apartment.

>>> I bought an apartment in Wonju City and I am considering buying another apartment.

actually I don`t know apartment investment.

>>> Actually, I don\'t know much about apartment investments.

my friend is investor.

>>> My friend is an investor.

He is my teatcher.

>>> He is my teacher.

he explain why buy apartment. and then I consider something.

>>> He explains why I should buy an apartment and then I consider on it.

but I don`t know why but it.

>>> Although I don\'t know why I should buy it.

I bought wonju apartment because he bought one.

>>> I bought an apartment in Wonju because he also bought one.

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