APEC
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Hosting APEC summits affects the improvement of our country\'s image like all the international competitors or conferences. Of course, the effect or result depends on whether hosting it is successful or not. Still, hosting itself has a instant impact on our country\'s status. I think that through this summits in Gyeongju, more and more people around the world have much interest in our country.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
You are right! Hosting big events such as competitions and summits can greatly impact the image of a country, both in a positive or negative way depending on the outcome. Still, I think being chosen is already a privilege, since not all countries get to experience being a host.
- T. Caitlyn
Hosting APEC summits affects the improvement of our country\'s image like all the international competitors or conferences.
>> Hosting APEC summits affects the improvement of our country\'s image, just like other international competitions or conferences.
Of course, the effect or result depends on whether hosting it is successful or not.
>> CORRECT
Still, hosting itself has a instant impact on our country\'s status.
>> Still, hosting itself has an instant impact on our country\'s status.
I think that through this summits in Gyeongju, more and more people around the world have much interest in our country.
>> I think that through this summit in Gyeongju, more and more people around the world have become more interested in our country.
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