Apologies

One time, I said sorry to my friend because I hurt her feelings by mistake. At first, I was nervous, but after I apologized, I felt relieved. My friend also smiled and said she forgave me. Apologizing is important because it helps people understand each other and rebuild trust. When we say sorry, relationships become stronger and more honest.

Hello there!

Jenny, you did such an excellent job on this homework! Your writing is very clear and well-organized, and I can see that you are becoming more confident in expressing your thoughts in English. I really like how you shared a personal story about saying sorry to your friend, it shows kindness and maturity. The way you explained why apologizing is important is also very thoughtful and meaningful.

Your sentences are getting smoother, and your ideas are well connected. I’m so proud of how much effort you’re putting into your work, and it really shows. Keep going, Jenny, you’re becoming such a strong and talented writer!

~Teacher Cathy

 

One time, I said sorry to my friend because I hurt her feelings by mistake.

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OR>>Once, I apologized to my friend after accidentally hurting her feelings.

At first, I was nervous, but after I apologized, I felt relieved.

>>CORRECT

OR>>At the beginning, I felt nervous, but once I apologized, I was relieved.

My friend also smiled and said she forgave me.

>>CORRECT

OR>>She smiled and said that she had forgiven me.

Apologizing is important because it helps people understand each other and rebuild trust.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Apologies are important since they allow people to understand one another and regain trust.

When we say sorry, relationships become stronger and more honest.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Saying sorry makes relationships stronger and more genuine.