Apology
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1. Have you experienced holding a grudge against someone for a long time?
My Ex-boyfriend cheated on me. Until I noticed that, He had abnormally obssessed with me. Always searched my phone on my back and told me what to do or not even for my clothes. Since I didn\'t expect that kind of guy was cheating on me and he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of His distrust was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and It was tough time to me. It is still difficult to me to trust men completely.
2. Which is more pleasant, forgiving or taking revenge?
I wish I could say \'Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!\'. Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said \'it depends, but if I can\'t forgive, I would choose to take revenge!\' as soon as they heard this question. And \'Forviging is not pleasant! Revenge could be!\' Partially I agree. But I am not good at those things. to me, It is easier to forgive or ignore.
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Good evening, Yu [이름]!
Your Answer: My Ex-boyfriend cheated on me. Until I noticed that, He had abnormally obssessed with me. Always searched my phone on my back and told me what to do or not even for my clothes. Since I didn\'t expect that kind of guy was cheating on me and he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of His distrust was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and It was tough time to me. It is still difficult to me to trust men completely.
Your Answer: I wish I could say \'Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!\'. Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said \'it depends, but if I can\'t forgive, I would choose to take revenge!\' as soon as they heard this question. And \'Forviging is not pleasant! Revenge could be!\' Partially I agree. But I am not good at those things. to me, It is easier to forgive or ignore.
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Question 1. Have you experienced holding a grudge against someone for a long time?
>> Before I found out that my ex-boyfriend cheated on me, I noticed that he was abnormally obsessed with me. He always searched through my phone behind my back and told me what to do or what clothes not to wear. Since I didn\'t expect that he was the kind of guy to cheat on me and since he was my first boyfriend, I was totally shocked. I realized that the reason of his lack of trust with me was himself. I held a grudge for a long time and it was a tough time for me. It is still difficult for me to trust men completely.
Question 2. Which is more pleasant, forgiving or taking revenge?
>> I wish I could say \"Taking revenge is my pleasure in my life!\" Some people around me can do that freely according to their feelings. My friends said, \"It depends, but if I can\'t forgive, I would choose to take revenge!,\" as soon as they heard this question, and \"Forgiving is not pleasant! Revenge could be!\" Partially, I agree, but I am not good at those things. For me, it is easier to forgive or ignore.
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I enjoyed reading your answers for the questions. :) For question number 2, there are only a few corrections, mostly on punctuations and capitalization only. :) Great job as usual! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with me in your answers. :)
Have a great night ahead!
Cheers!
~Miya^^
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