Apology and homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
First of all, I am really sorry that I didn’t get your skype call.
Honestly speaking, I met my friend last Thursday evening, and after some of meeting about new building, we drank all night.
As I told you, I changed my phone lately, so I couldn’t notice your call.
I am so sorry.
Meanwhile, now I am in Hawaii.
Because I didn’t get used to time difference, I was sleepy all day.
Anyway, I could listen and speak in English with confidence, and it made me very happy. Thanks to your teaching.
The weather in Hawaii now is just like Summer in Korea; warm and wet.
And, you know what?
Food and product are very expensive here.
I paid around 100 dollars for our lunch.
Those were just some of chicken, fried potatoes, and small shrimp.
In addition, there is a tip culture here.
We should expense around 20% of each food.
Hence, I was worried that we will spend much money in this travel.
However, I have no choice.
I will do my best to make our journey happier.
See you Monday
강사 첨삭
Hi!
It is fantastic to know that you are already in Hawaii! How are the ladies doing? By now, I hope that you have gotten over the jet lag to enjoy your vacation to the maximum level. I had a hunch that you may not be able to attend your class since you were so busy preparing for your trip. Since you are in a secluded island, everything must really be expensive due to importation. So, savor all the food and facilities to get the value of your money.
I\'m ecstatic to learn that your English is doing so well! Maybe you will speak like an American when I see you tomorrow in class... Well, I am very confident that you will get by smoothly because of your very clear pronunciation and confidence.
As always, underscored are the grammar suggestions. Kindly read them carefully. Your sentences are easy to comprehend and present very clear ideas always.
They say, when you are spending for the people you love (your family) don\'t count the cost. So, have a blast!
See you at high noon in Hawaii, Dr. [이름]!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
First of all, I am really sorry that I didn’t get your skype call.
>> Correct!
Or: Skype
Honestly speaking, I met my friend last Thursday evening, and after some of meeting about new building, we drank all night.
>> Honestly speaking, I met my friend last Thursday evening, and after some meeting about our new building, we drank all night.
As I told you, I changed my phone lately, so I couldn’t notice your call.
>> Correct!
I am so sorry.
I am so sorry.
>> Correct!
Meanwhile, now I am in Hawaii.
>> Correct!
Because I didn’t get used to time difference, I was sleepy all day.
>> Correct!
Anyway, I could listen and speak in English with confidence, and it made me very happy. Thanks to your teaching.
>> Correct!
The weather in Hawaii now is just like Summer in Korea; warm and wet.
>> Correct!
And, you know what?
>> Correct!
Food and product are very expensive here.
>> Correct!
I paid around 100 dollars for our lunch.
>> Correct!
Those were just some of chicken, fried potatoes, and small shrimp.
>> Those were just some chicken, fried potatoes, and small shrimps.
In addition, there is a tip culture here.
>> Correct!
We should expense around 20% of each food.
>> We should spend around 20% for each food.
Hence, I was worried that we will spend much money in this travel.
>> Correct
However, I have no choice.
>> Correct!
I will do my best to make our journey happier.
>> Correct!
See you Monday
>> Correct!
Or: See you on Monday.
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