Apple
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Apple is very good for our body because it has lots of vitamin. Espacially when I ate in the morning. So I every moring I eat aplle or apple juice. It is sweet and really nice. I eat apple juice every morning. I lke to eat Apple because it is really sweet. Also My ister ikes to eat apple. We also eat apples after dinner.
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Hi Min!^^
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~T. Mayleen~
Apple is very good for our body because it has lots of vitamin.
>> Apple is good for our body because it has a lot of vitamins.
Espacially when I ate in the morning.
>> I usually eat it in the morning.
So I every moring I eat aplle or apple juice.
>> Every morning, I eat apple or drink apple juice.
It is sweet and really nice.
>> It is sweet and tastes really nice.
I eat apple juice every morning.
>> I drink apple juice every morning.
I lke to eat Apple because it is really sweet.
>> I like to eat apple because it\'s really sweet.
Also My ister ikes to eat apple.
>> My sister also likes to eat apple.
We also eat apples after dinner.
>> CORRECT
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