Apple

2016-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Apple is very good for our body because it has lots of vitamin. Espacially when I ate in the morning. So I every moring I eat aplle or apple juice. It is sweet and really nice. I eat apple juice every morning. I lke to eat Apple because it is really sweet. Also My ister ikes to eat apple. We also eat apples after dinner.

강사 첨삭

Hi Min!^^ Good evening and happy Thursday!!!   Thank you for this composition but were you sleepy when you wrote this?:) I\'ve made some modifications for you to review later on, okay?^_- I\'ll see you in class.   ~T. Mayleen~   Apple is very good for our body because it has lots of vitamin. >> Apple is good for our body because it has a lot of vitamins. Espacially when I ate in the morning. >> I usually eat it in the morning. So I every moring I eat aplle or apple juice. >> Every morning, I eat apple or drink apple juice. It is sweet and really nice. >> It is sweet and tastes really nice. I eat apple juice every morning. >> I drink apple juice every morning. I lke to eat Apple because it is really sweet. >> I like to eat apple because it\'s really sweet. Also My ister ikes to eat apple. >> My sister also likes to eat apple. We also eat apples after dinner. >> CORRECT

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