apple pay is supposed to launch
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Word that Apple is now considering to lauch the apple card service in some countries get out currently.
Korea is one of them, so a lot of appe users are looking forward to it not wanting it winded up as a rumor.
In my perspective, it does move the needle since many gallexy users insist to use gallaxy because of samsung pay.
Samsung pay users have not been carring their wallets since it launched. they get used to not having a bag either.
Some say that apple blow it\\\'s chance to get bigger partion in smart phone market if they don\\\'t open the service.
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Word that Apple is now considering to lauch the apple card service in some countries get out currently.>>Word that Apple is now considering to launch the Apple Card service in come countries currently came out.
Korea is one of them, so a lot of appe users are looking forward to it not wanting it winded up as a rumor.
>>Korea is one of them, so, a lot of Apple users are looking forward to it and hoping it won\'t wind up as a rumour.
In my perspective, it does move the needle since many gallexy users insist to use gallaxy because of samsung pay.
>>In my perspective, it does not move the needle since many Galaxy users insist to use Galaxy phones because of Samsung Pay.
Samsung pay users have not been carring their wallets since it launched. they get used to not having a bag either.
>>Samsung Pay users have not been carrying their wallets since it launched.
they get used to not having a bag either.
>>They got used to not having a bag as well.
Some say that apple blow it\\\'s chance to get bigger partion in smart phone market if they don\\\'t open the service.
Some say that apple blow it\\\'s chance to get bigger partion in smart phone market if they don\\\'t open the service.
>>Some say that Apple might blow it\'s chance to get a bigger partition in the smart phone market if they don\'t open this service.
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