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Hi [이름]!
I\'m glad that you enjoy reading books. Continue your passion for reading. It will help you become smarter.^^
Have a good start of the week.
~t. Kelly^^
task: What is the best book you have ever read? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My best book is comic books.
>> Comic books are the best books for me.
All comic books are get funny.
>> All comic books are fun to read.
Exspecially,I love history comic books.
>> I especially love history comic books.
So, I can learn history and I can get funny and exciting.
>> I can learn about history because the stories are fun and exciting.
Also,I like science books,too.
>> I like Science books, too.
I interest science because it is fun.
>> I am interested in Science because it is fun to learn it.
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