Applicant's letter of acceptance
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending this composition. You have good voacbulary and I am impressed you used them very well.I have corrected some sentences for you. Take good care and have a good day.
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
Applicant's letter of acceptance
>>Correct
Ella, it is a kind of trading document for payment.
>>Correct.
We imported 2 items as below and we should pay the charges.
>>We imported 2 items indicated below and we should pay the charges.
This is the last time for us to pay the residual amount.
>>Correct
>>We have a due date to pay the residual amount.
Please give me correction about grammer, vocabulary etc.
>>Please give me corrections on my grammar,vocabulary, etc.
Goods
>>Goods:
1. MS500 X 1 : Installation Complete
>>Correct
2. PSG400 X 1 : Installation Complete
>>Correct
Dear [Name] of beneficiary
>>Dear [Name] of Beneficiary,
Regarding goods as above, we confimed those stuffs which we asked to beneficiary.
>>Regarding the goods above, we confirmed those things which we asked for the beneficiary.
According to the L/C payment term, we allow the 10% residual payment.
>>According to the L/C payment term, we are allowed the 10% residual payment.
This time amout due is USD 12,200.
>>The amount due this time is USD 12,200.
If you have any question, feel free contact to me.
>>CORRECT :)
>>If you have any question feel free to contact me at [이름][이메일]
My email addres is [이름][이메일]
>>My e-mail address is [이름][이메일]
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