appointment, phone

2020-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

[forgotten appointment] 1. You know, I make many appointments with people. On weekdays, we make work-related appointments, and on weekends, usually we make things that children enjoy. You know what I mean, When I make appointment on weekends, I usually meet my friends at the nearby playground. The reason I like this place is that I can have fun chatting with my friends while the kids are having fun. 2. It\'s an appointment...There are no special promises to remember. Well.. Last saturday , I went to my yunger sister\'s house in Seoul. She has three children, so if I combine it with my children, it is five. Oh my godness!! Five children. In the apartment playground, kids play well, fight, cry, and laugh . And I had a pleasant chatting with my sister. That is the memory I have the most now. 3. I seem to be calling on the way home from work. I mainly talk to my eldest sister. Talking on the way home after work relive my stress.

강사 첨삭

You did an awesome job [이름]! Please keep in mind all the corrections I made below. ^^
-Teacher Elise


You know, I make many appointments with people. 
>> CORRECT

On weekdays, we make work-related appointments, and on weekends, usually we make things that children enjoy.
>> On weekdays, we make work-related appointments. And on weekends, we usually make appointments the children will enjoy. 

You know what I mean. 
>>CORRECT

When I make appointment on weekends, I usually meet my friends at the nearby playground.
>> CORRECT

The reason I like this place is that I can have fun chatting with my friends while the kids are having fun.
>> CORRECT

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It\'s an appointment...There are no special promises to remember.
>> It\'s an appointment. There are no special promises to remember. 

Well.. Last saturday , I went to my yunger sister\'s house in Seoul.
>> Well, last Saturday, I went to my younger sister\'s house in Seoul. 

She has three children, so if I combine it with my children, it is five.
>> She has three children so all together with mine, they\'re five. 

Oh my goodness!! Five children.
>> CORRECT

In the apartment playground, kids play well, fight, cry, and laugh .
>>CORRECT

And I had a pleasant chatting with my sister.
>>CORRECT

That is the memory I have the most now.
>> CORRECT
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I seem to be calling on the way home from work.
>>CORRECT 

I mainly talk to my eldest sister. 
>> CORRECT

Talking on the way home after work relives my stress.
>> CORRECT

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