apri 15\'s homework

2024-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I like my neighborhood because it\'s convient to live. There are many cafes, markets and restaurants near my house. I can eat and drink easly by walk. Sometimes i feel i don\'t want to go out then i order on deliever service. That\'s also well done.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about your neighborhood. ^^

-Teacher Ash

I like my neighborhood because it\'s convient to live.

>> I like my neighborhood because of the convenience it brings.

There are many cafes, markets and restaurants near my house.

>> CORRECT

I can eat and drink easly by walk.

>> I can easily buy food because there are plenty of food stalls and restaurant nearby.

Sometimes i feel i don\'t want to go out then i order on deliever service.

>> Whenever I feel like staying at home all day, I just order food online and have it delivered to my house.

That\'s also well done.

>> That\'s also another reason why I like my neighborhood.

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