April 12, 2016

2016-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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How can I extend my vocabulary? Today, I don't wanna deal with article as I did, but just talk about my English ability. Nowadays, I feel that it is required for me to have a good command of English naturally. Thus, I have been trying to listen an article of PBS news hour for some months, one of the famous new programs in USA and think that it is very helpful for me. But, it is not perfect and it requires more time proficiently to speak the sentences that news anchors use to announce their article. The sentences are real words and I am looking for the time when I don't hesitate to select them for communication. I will keep continuing. Have a good night and see you.

강사 첨삭

Hello James!   Sometimes, it is hard to evaluate our own learning progress. There should be a standard for you to evaluate the progress. Keep on learning and practising, I believe there is definitely great progress. Most of the news is usually presented without subtitles, which makes it even harder for a non-native speaker to understand. If you want to improve at understanding the news, start by reading newspapers. Then watch high-quality news channels, such as BBC News, CBC News, CNN, Financial Times etc. You can also find news videos on YouTube, so that you can watch them again and again until you understand the gist.   Teacher Venus^^   How can I extend my vocabulary? >>>CORRECTToday, I don\'t wanna deal with article as I did, but just talk about my English ability. >>>Today, I don\'t want to deal with an article as I did, but I\'ll just talk about my English ability.   Nowadays, I feel that it is required for me to have a good command of English naturally. >>>CORRECT Thus, I have been trying to listen an article of PBS news hour for some months, one of the famous new programs in USA and think that it is very helpful for me. >>>Thus, I have been trying to listen to the shows of PBS NewsHour, one of the famous new programs in USA for some months, and I think that these shows are very helpful for me.   But, it is not perfect and it requires more time proficiently to speak the sentences that news anchors use to announce their article. >>>But, my English ability is not perfect and it requires more time to speak proficiently the sentences that news anchors use to announce their news.   The sentences are real words and I am looking for the time when I don\'t hesitate to select them for communication. >>>The sentences are real words and I am looking for the time when I don\'t hesitate to use them in my communication.   I will keep continuing. >>>CORRECTHave a good night and see you. >>>CORRECT

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