April 12th\'s homework
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My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time. I can do my hobby what i can\'t during the week.
So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool. Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig.
and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.
I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window.
If i feel sleepy, i\'m take a nap but if i don\'t, i read a book.
And try to study English or a trade certificate. That\'s my ideal weekend.
But it doesn\'t always complete the tasks like this. I spend most of my time watching Youtube.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool.
and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.
And try to study English or a trade certificate.
But it doesn\'t always complete the tasks like this.
Thanks for sharing your ideal weekend. I know how it feels to do what you love. ^^
-Teacher Ash
My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time.
>> My ideal weekend is enjoying my own time.
I can do my hobby what i can\'t during the week.
>> I enjoy my time by doing the hobby that I can\'t do during the weekdays.
So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool.
>> I wake up early and go for a swim in the community pool close to our house.
Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig.
>> That is how I would start my day afresh.
and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.
>> After that, I eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching YouTube or Netflix.
I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window.
>> I clean up my room and feel the fresh wind and sunlight from my open window.
If i feel sleepy, i\'m take a nap but if i don\'t, i read a book.
>>If I feel sleepy, I take a nap but if not, I read a book.
And try to study English or a trade certificate.
>> I might also try to study English or study a course to get a certificate.
That\'s my ideal weekend.
>> CORRECT
But it doesn\'t always complete the tasks like this.
>>However, I do not always complete the tasks like this.
I spend most of my time watching Youtube.
>>It is because I spend my time watching YouTube.
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