April 14, 2016

2016-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Election day! many people don't foresee yesterday's result. Today, I cannot but mention yesterday because nobody could not expect the result. You know that it was our general election to select member of National Assembly. Almost people anticipated that it would be easy for ruling party to occupy more than half the seats, but it was completely off. I am the citizen who thinks that we need to change current political structure. because we are now standing at a critical crossroads. It seems like many young people no longer want to see the politicians just standing by their distress such as job shortage, inequality and so on including me. I don't think the result just now changes everything, but I feel really great about the fact that the young guys can express their political opinions.

강사 첨삭

Hello James!   It\'s great to check your homework again. Some reminders: In some languages, a negative word like nobody, nothing or never has to be used with a negative verb. In English, these words are themselves enough to give a negative meaning, and not is not necessary. example: I opened the door, but I could see nobody. (NOT I opened the door, but I couldn’t see nobody.)   Teacher Venus^^   Election day! >>>CORRECT   many people don\'t foresee yesterday\'s result.>>>Many people didn\'t foresee yesterday\'s result. Today, I cannot but mention yesterday because nobody could not expect the result. >>>Today, I cannot but mention what happened yesterday because nobody could expect the result.   You know that it was our general election to select member of National Assembly. >>>You know that it was our general election to select members of the National Assembly.   Almost people anticipated that it would be easy for ruling party to occupy more than half the seats, but it was completely off. >>>Almost all people anticipated that it would be easy for the ruling party to occupy more than half of the seats, but it was completely off. I am the citizen who thinks that we need to change current political structure. because we are now standing at a critical crossroads. >>>I am a citizen who thinks that we need to the change current political structure because we are now standing at critical crossroads.   It seems like many young people no longer want to see the politicians just standing by their distress such as job shortage, inequality and so on including me. >>>It seems like many young people including me no longer want to see the politicians just ignore people\'s distress such as job shortages, inequality and so on.   I don\'t think the result just now changes everything, but I feel really great about the fact that the young guys can express their political opinions. >>>I don\'t think the result just now changes everything, but I feel really great about the fact that the young guys can express their political opinions.

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