April 17th\'s homework

2024-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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The subway is so bustling during rush hour that i drive to work. I should have used my time productively after my college, but i regret not being able to. Busy schedule tends to keep people out of depression.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름],

Thanks for doing the homework. You did really great here. ^^

-Teacher Ash

The subway is so bustling during rush hour that i drive to work.

>> I had to drive to work because of the bustling subway during rush hour.

I should have used my time productively after my college, but i regret not being able to.

>> I should have used my time productively after college. I regret not being able to.

Busy schedule tends to keep people out of depression.

>> CORRECT

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