April 1st\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
write about what you like most in your neighborhood. Answer in three to five sentences.
The best thing about my neighborhoods is a walking dogs. I could meet many kind of a dog and owner. There\'s mostly small dogs and they\'re really cute and kind. Sometimes they barked each other and owner trying to stop a fight. that\'s so funny.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su,
You have a nice neighborhood. Thanks for sharing. ^^
-Teacher Ash
The best thing about my neighborhoods is a walking dogs.
>> The best thing about my neighborhood is the space to walk dogs.
I could meet many kind of a dog and owner.
>>I can meet many kinds of dogs and owners.
There\'s mostly small dogs and they\'re really cute and kind.
>>The majority of the dogs are small, exceptionally adorable and gentle.
Sometimes they barked each other and owner trying to stop a fight.
>> Sometimes, the dogs bark at each other and the owners try to stop them.
that\'s so funny.
>>It is so funny.
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