April 4, 2016
학생이 쓴 원문
"Policymakers, scholars at odds over economic outlook"
I have read the article whose subject is the above sentence. As the time for election comes, many groundless promises always raise up. In this year, many policymaker candidates stress that the economy bottoming out becomes better while they bring up the consumer sentiment index (CSI) rising to 100. We also always know that it will not be true and just for attracting voter.
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
I like it that you made your point. A relative clause with the relative pronoun whose can be used to talk about something which belongs to a person or an animal, or something or someone that is associated with a person. The relative pronoun whose can sometimes be used to refer to countries, organizations or other nouns which imply a group of people. But whose is not generally used to talk about something belonging to or relating to a thing.
Teacher Venus^^
\"Policymakers, scholars at odds over economic outlook\"
>>>CORRECTI have read the article whose subject is the above sentence.
>>>I have read the article\'s subject which is in the above sentence.
As the time for election comes, many groundless promises always raise up.
>>>As the time for election comes, many groundless promises are always raised.
In this year, many policymaker candidates stress that the economy bottoming out becomes better while they bring up the consumer sentiment index (CSI) rising to 100.
>>>CORRECT
We also always know that it will not be true and just for attracting voter.
>>>We also always know that it will not be true because it\'s just for attracting voters.
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