April 5th\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I woke up 6am and my mother and i visited as soon as the election office opened. Because it will be crowded and waiting after 9am, so we decided to visit early. There were not a few diligent people. I had to vote for each a ballot twice. One was for proportional representation and another was for member of the national assembly. When i back home, i slept again.
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Thanks for sharing about your election experience. I think it\'s wise to wake up early especially when it comes to these kind of events. It\'s funny how you went back to sleep after voting. I would do the same too. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I woke up 6am and my mother and i visited as soon as the election office opened.
>> I woke up at 6 am. My mom and I went to the election office as soon as it opened.
Because it will be crowded and waiting after 9am, so we decided to visit early.
>> It is because it will be crowded after 9 am so, we decided to go there early.
There were not a few diligent people.
>> There were a few people who came earlier.
I had to vote for each a ballot twice.
>> I had to vote twice.
One was for proportional representation and another was for member of the national assembly.
>>One was for a political party and the other was for a member of the national assembly.
When i back home, i slept again.
>> I went back to sleep as soon as I got home.
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