April Fool's Day

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

March is already over. The time is rapidly passing. Also, tomorrow is April 1st. It is April fool’s day. In April fool’s day, we cheat somebody by telling a lie or make somebody trip for nothing. When I was a high school student, I have cheated my classmate. I told her that the teacher called her urgently but actually it was a lie. When she went to the teacher, he said that why she came to him. She was at a loss for word when she came back to the class room. After a time, she said that they were really embarrassed at that time. It was very funny. I want to do that again tomorrow. However, I know that the excessive joke or trick out of hands make someone feel annoyed. If someone seems to hate my trick, therefore, I have to stop that.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for dropping by. Let뭩 talk about your composition in class. See you.^^

March is already over.

>> The month of March is already over.
The time is rapidly passing.

>> Time flies by so fast.
Also, tomorrow is April 1st. It is April fool’s day.

>> Tomorrow comes the month of April.
In April fool’s day, we cheat somebody by telling a lie or make somebody trip for nothing.

>> April Fools' Day is celebrated all around the world on the 1st of April of every year. It is widely recognized and celebrated as a day that tolerates practical jokes and general foolishness.
When I was a high school student, I have cheated my classmate.
I told her that the teacher called her urgently but actually it was a lie.

>> During my High School years. I played a practical joke at my classmate. I told her that our teacher is urgently looking for her.

When she went to the teacher, he said that why she came to him.

>> And then she asked our teacher  why did she call for her. And our teacher said that she did not.
She was at a loss for word when she came back to the class room.

>>Correct.
After a time, she said that they were really embarrassed at that time.

>> After class my classmate told me that she was really embarrased awhile ago.
It was very funny. I want to do that again tomorrow.

>> It was really funny and I’d like to do it again tomorrow,
However, I know that the excessive joke or trick out of hands make someone feel annoyed.

>>Although, I know that the excessive joke or tricks that are out of hand can make someone feel annoyed.
If someone seems to hate my trick, therefore, I have to stop that.

>>Since my classmate hated what I did I know now that I must stop.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·