Are adoptions common in your country?

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I am not sure if adoptions are common in korea, but I know many parents abandon their child to the center which provide adoption by free.

>>I am not sure if adoptions are common in Korea but I know many parents abandoned their children to the center which provides adoption for free.

As I know, a lot of young women who can not afford to bring their child up deliver a baby and then they worry how to raise their baby without good support. 

>>As far as I know, a lot of young women who can not afford to raise their child delivers a baby but then they worry on how to raise their baby without a good support.
Many people are suffering from not having a baby.

>>Correct!

OR:
>> Many people suffers because they don\'t have a baby.

For them, adoptions can be is really good choice and they can live a happier life.

>>For them, adopting a child might be a good choice for them to live happily.