Are all important discoveries the result of focusing on one subject?

2016-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Of course, most scientific discoveries need endless struggle but I heard that some of discoveries resulted from pure chance or mistakes. You must have heard of 3M Company. This company was known for sticky note which was invented just by chance. The one who invented sticky note wanted to invent strong glue originally but he failed a lot times. One day he tried glue on paper which he expected to be strong but it was not at all. Instead, he found the paper can be attached and removed easily. Although it was a discovery by accident, however, he exerted all possible to invent strong glue prior to find the sticky note. So I consider that lowest effort will be needed to discover something regardless of whether it is what he intended to discover or not.

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Hello, [이름]a! (^__^) How\'s your day? Thank you very much for doing your homework. I enjoyed reading about your opinions. I think you made nice sentences. However, there are times when your sentences lack the appropriate article like the, an or an. If you\'re going to practice on how to use them correctly, your sentences will be flawless in no time. ^^ I absolutely agree with you when you said not all important discoveries are made because of complete focus and devotion from the people who discovered them. A great number of these discoveries were discovered by accident. And these discoveries, whether we admit it or not, actually made our lives more comfortable and convenient. Some of these breakthroughs would be the discovery of penicillin which is a group of antibiotics used to combat a variety of bacterial infections. The Scottish biologist Alexander Fleming took an August vacation from his day-to-day work in the lab while investigating staphylococci, known commonly as staph. Upon his return on September 3, 1928, the perceptive scientist found a strange fungus on a culture he had left in his lab--a fungus that had killed off all surrounding bacteria in the culture. After its discovery, modern medicine was never the same.  So you see, even if the effort was intended or not, good things come out of it. ^^ I hope you are having a great day. See you again on Friday. ^^ ~ Teacher Charry (^_^) Of course, most scientific discoveries need endless struggle but I heard that some of discoveries resulted from pure chance or mistakes. >> Of course, most scientific discoveries need an endless struggle but I heard that some discoveries resulted from pure chance or mistakes. You must have heard of 3M Company. >> CORRECT! OR >> You\'ve probably heard of 3M Comapny. This company was known for sticky note which was invented just by chance. >> This company was known for a sticky note which was invented just by chance. OR >> This company was known for its sticky notes which were created by accident. The one who invented sticky note wanted to invent strong glue originally but he failed a lot times. >> The one who invented the sticky note wanted to invent a strong glue originally but he failed a lot of times. One day he tried glue on paper which he expected to be strong but it was not at all. >> One day he tried the glue on a paper which he expected to be strong but it was not at all. Instead, he found the paper can be attached and removed easily. >> CORRECT! OR >> Instead, he found that the paper can be attached and removed easily. Although it was a discovery by accident, however, he exerted all possible to invent strong glue prior to find the sticky note. >> Although it was a discovery by accident, he exerted a lot of effort to invent a strong glue prior to the creation of the sticky note. So I consider that lowest effort will be needed to discover something regardless of whether it is what he intended to discover or not. >> CORRECT! OR >> So for me effort, no matter how great or small it is, is necessary to come up with something regardless of whether it is what he intended to discover or not.

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