Are animals responsible for 2019 novel coronavirus infections in people?
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At first glimpse, It is all about animals. But I think not awaring health care and not being conscious of eating something has provoked the disaster. I have a prove about this. After the humans were first generated, there weren\'t many disease. But they also didn\'t have any treatments. After the industrial revolution, medical technology has improved and improved the life quality. But the disease which didn\'t existed for centuries has breaked out. The Ebola, MERS Coronacirus are the examples. We are breaking out the disease anf generate it by ourselves not the animals.
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>>> CORRECT
But I think not awaring health care and not being conscious of eating something has provoked the disaster.
>>> But I think not being conscious of eating something has provoked the disaster.
I have a prove about this.
>>> I have proof for this.
After the humans were first generated, there weren\'t many disease.
>>> After the humans were first generated, there weren\'t many diseases.
But they also didn\'t have any treatments.
>>> CORRECT
After the industrial revolution, medical technology has improved and improved the life quality.
>>> After the industrial revolution, medical technology has improved and it has improved the quality of life.
But the disease which didn\'t existed for centuries has breaked out.
>>> But the disease which didn\'t exist for centuries has been breaking out.
The Ebola, MERS Coronacirus are the examples.
>>> The Ebola, MERS, Coronavirus are just some examples.
We are breaking out the disease anf generate it by ourselves not the animals.
>>> We are breaking out the disease and generate it by ourselves, not the animals.
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