Are banks the best place to keep your money in?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I though about it. But now, I\'m considering the stocks to save my money. It\'s because I will prepare for my old age and have to get my own house. :)
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! That is one of the best decision you can do. Invest for your future.
Aki~
When I was young, I though about it.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I thought that way when I was young.
But now, I\'m considering the stocks to save my money.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> But now, I\'m considering to invest my monet.
It\'s because I will prepare for my old age and have to get my own house. :)
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Because I need to prepare for my old age and to have my own house in the future.
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