Are birthdays really important? Why or why not?

Hello Chloe!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The birthday is very imporant. Because it is the one day in the year and it is a day that we coming out to the world.

>> A birthday is very important because it only comes one day each year and it is the day we came into this world.

 Also we have a party!!yey!!

>> Also, we have a party on that day!! Yey!!