Are college tuition fees reasonable in your country? Is it easy to get scholarships or government

2017-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Personally, I think the tution fees are not reasonable in my country. There are two reaosns to support my opinion. The first reason is that I have never seen detailed list which is what our univeristy use on our tuition fees. The second reason is that it is unfair. In my university's case, there are some scholarships for each majors, but it is not for every students in my major and has corruption. In conclusion, I do not think the tution fees are suitable for students in my country.

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you for being honest in sharing your views about the tuition fee in your country. I hope that scholarshipscan be granted to all deserving students in your department because it will be very helpful to them.

~Kelly^^

Personally, I think the tution fees are not reasonable in my country.

>> Personally, I think the tuition fees are not reasonable in my country.

There are two reaosns to support my opinion.

>> There are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is that I have never seen detailed list which is what our univeristy use on our tuition fees.

>> The first reason is that I have never seen a breakdown of financial report as to where our university uses our tuition fees.
The second reason is that it is unfair.

>> Correct.

In my university\'s case, there are some scholarships for each majors, but it is not for every students in my major and has corruption.

>> In my university\'s case, they offer some scholarships for each department, but not to every student in my major, so there is corruption in our department.
In conclusion, I do not think the tution fees are suitable for students in my country.

>> In conclusion, I do not think the tuition fees are fair for students in my country.

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