Are college tuition fees reasonable in your country? Is it easy to get scholarships or government
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for being honest in sharing your views about the tuition fee in your country. I hope that scholarshipscan be granted to all deserving students in your department because it will be very helpful to them.
~Kelly^^
Personally, I think the tution fees are not reasonable in my country.
>> Personally, I think the tuition fees are not reasonable in my country.
There are two reaosns to support my opinion.
>> There are two reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason is that I have never seen detailed list which is what our univeristy use on our tuition fees.
>> The first reason is that I have never seen a breakdown of financial report as to where our university uses our tuition fees.
The second reason is that it is unfair.
>> Correct.
In my university\'s case, there are some scholarships for each majors, but it is not for every students in my major and has corruption.
>> In my university\'s case, they offer some scholarships for each department, but not to every student in my major, so there is corruption in our department.
In conclusion, I do not think the tution fees are suitable for students in my country.
>> In conclusion, I do not think the tuition fees are fair for students in my country.
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