Are emotions necessary for human survival? Why or why not?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
I totally agree with you. Being gritty is more important than having a high IQ. Thus, emotions are necessary for humans. We wouldn\'t like to become robots in the first place. haha! Keep on writing!
~Teacher Eunice
If we don\'t have emotions, I am not sure how life look like.
>> If we don\'t have emotions, I am not sure how life looks like.
I don\'t think people can live without emotions.
>> Correct!
Because we are able to express our feeling to others when something happens.
>> Because we are able to express our feeling to others when something happen.
If we do not have our emotions, we can not realize the problems of our body and then we don\'t know how to explain our symptom to the doctor.
>> If we do not have our emotions, we can not realize the problems of our body and then we don\'t know how to explain our symptoms to the doctors.
I think people would like to be happy.
>> Correct!
We do not want to work, have a time with our family, If we don\'t have our emotions.
>> We do not want to go to work and have time with our family if we don\'t have our emotions.
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