Are family gatherings more about tradition or fun in your opinion?
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Your opinion is clear and easy to understand. I like how you explained your reasoning in a simple but meaningful way. To improve, pay attention to prepositions (e.g., participate in) and conditional sentences (If tradition were...). Overall, nice job expressing your thoughts naturally!
-Teacher Wela
Even though we get together due to traditional events, I think we feel happy being with family.
>> Even though we get together because of traditional events, I think we feel happy being with our family.
If tradition is the only reason to have family gatherings, I think I would not participate them.
>> If tradition were the only reason to have family gatherings, I think I would not participate in them.
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