Are fast food franchises popular in your country? Explain.
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Yes, because the fast food franchise is most people like so popular in my country for example KFC, MC Donald\'s and Starbucks.
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Are fast food franchises popular in your country? Explain.
Yes because the fast food franchise is most people like so popular in my country for example KFC, MC Donald\'s and Starbucks.
>> Yes because most people in my country like fast food franchises, for example, KFC, McDonald\'s, and Starbucks.
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