Are fathers capable of carrying out the duties of a mother and vice versa?

2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Fathers can of course carry out the duties of mothers. In modern society, we don\'t have any specific gender stereo type. Traditionally, women keep their child and do the household chores. Adversary, men work to earn money to support their family. And there are jobs that women only do, so people can only find their occupation accordant with gender. But now, people can choose their job in accordance with their preference. Some fathers like to take care their baby and have the talent to do housework. And mother who want to keep building the career, they do. To this present, women can only bear a child, but who knows? With help of science, man may give birth to a baby in future.

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Fathers can of course carry out the duties of mothers.

>>> correct


 In modern society, we don\'t have any specific gender stereo type.

>>> correct


 Traditionally, women keep their child and do the household chores.

>>> Traditionally, women keep their children and do the household chores.


 Adversary, men work to earn money to support their family.

>>> correct


 And there are jobs that women only do, so people can only find their occupation accordant with gender.

>>> correct


 But now, people can choose their job in accordance with their preference.

>>> correct


 Some fathers like to take care their baby and have the talent to do housework.

>>> Some fathers like to take care of their babies and they have the talent to do housework at the same time.


 And mother who want to keep building the career, they do.

>>> And mother\'s who want to keep building their career, they do too.


 To this present, women can only bear a child, but who knows?

>>> correct


 With help of science, man may give birth to a baby in future.

>>> With the help of science, man may be able to give birth to a baby in the future.


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