Are fireworks safe or dangerous? What should people do to stay safe?
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I think the fireworks is very dangerous because fireworks is about the fire.
So many serious injury.
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Are fireworks safe or dangerous? What should people do to stay safe?
I think the fireworks is very dangerous because fireworks is about the fire.
>>> I think fireworks are very dangerous because they involve fire.
>>> OR: I believe fireworks are risky because they involve fire and often result in injuries.
So many serious injury.
>>> They can cause serious injuries.
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