Are friends more important than family? What do you think?
학생이 쓴 원문
Are friends more important than family? What do you think?
I think Family and friends are both important.
When a family haunt me, friend helps me.
On the contrary,when a friend haunt me, family helps me.
This relationship is relative.
Importance varies according to time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there again my dear!
I absolutely agree with you. Family and friends are bot important.
There are things that you can\'t open up to your family but you can to your friends.
And it\'s vice versa. So we should treasure these important people and spend time with them as often as we could.
Thanks again! See you in class!
~Teacher Shanee
Are friends more important than family? What do you think?I think Family and friends are both important.
>>Correct! (family)When a family haunt me, friend helps me.
>>When my family haunts me, my friend helps me.On the contrary, when a friend haunt me, family helps me.
>>On the contrary, when a friend haunts me, my family helps me.
This relationship is relative.
>>Correct!Importance varies according to time.
>>Correct!
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