Are friends more important than family? What do you think?
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Family versus friends is really difficult question. When I was a teens, friends were the most important thing in my life. However I realized the importance of family. I was born and grew up in my family. My parents are always on my side and my parents home is always my home although I was married. And family can be bec ome friends but friends can\'t. My best friends are my mother and husband. Therefore family is more important to me better than friends.
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Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Family versus friends is really difficult question.
>> \"Family or friends?\" Is a really difficult question.
When I was a teens, friends were the most important thing in my life.
>> When I was a teen, friends were the most important thing in my life.
However I realized the importance of family.
>> However, I realized the importance of family.
I was born and grew up in my family.
>> I was raised by my family.
My parents are always on my side and my parents home is always my home although I was married.
>> My parents are always on my side and my parents\' home is always my home, even if I\'m already married.
And family can be bec ome friends but friends can\'t.
>> My family can become my friends, but my friends can\'t become my family.
My best friends are my mother and husband.
>> My best friends are my mother and husband.
Therefore family is more important to me better than friends.
>> Therefore, for me family is more important than friends.
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