Are friends more important than family? What do you think?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a very difficult question.
Friends are really important to live.
live is mean teenager, 20\" and grow up adult.. society.
A friend I can talk about worried something is really important.
My parents(family) made me born in this world.
It is difficult to express in any word. (Parents Love)
Come to think of it, parents(family) are more important.
Good question~ teaher, Thank you.
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Hello [이름]! You have done a great job with your homework today! Keep it up!
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~Teacher Sheila
It\'s a very difficult question.
>>CORRECT
Friends are really important to live.
>>Friends are really important for us to live.
live is mean teenager, 20\" and grow up adult.. society.
>>Living means becoming a teenager, in my 20s, and growing up as an adult in a society.
A friend I can talk about worried something is really important.
>>A friend I can talk about my worries is really important.
OR>>Having a friend whom I can talk about my worries is really important.
My parents(family) made me born in this world.
>>My parents gave birth to me into this world.
It is difficult to express in any word. (Parents Love)
>>CORRECT
OR>>It is difficult to express in any word about parents\' love for us.
Come to think of it, parents(family) are more important.
>>Come to think of it, parents are more important.
OR>>Come to think of it, family is more important.
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