Are games at present better or worse than games in the past?
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Here are my corrections:
I am not interested in games.
>>> CORRECT
>>>Or: I am not interested in any games.
I don\'t know well about games.
>>> CORRECT
In korea, nowadays, computer games are occupaied by korean progamers.
>>> In Korea, nowadays, computer games are occupied by Korean Progamers.
One of the games is \"suden attack \". i used to play the game.
>>> One of the games is \"sudden attack \", I used to play the game.
it was addictied of me. Compare to an old game, nowaday\'s game make us focuse on playing it.
>>> It was addicted to me. Compared to an old game, nowadays game makes us focus on playing it..
Therefore, we can relieve stress easily.
>>> CORRECT
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