Are games at present better or worse than games in the past?

2019-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I am not interested in games. I don\'t know well about games. In korea, nowadays, computer games are occupaied by korean progamers. One of the games is \"suden attack \". i used to play the game. it was addictied of me. Compare to an old game, nowaday\'s game make us focuse on playing it. Therefore, we can relieve stress easily.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for the effort to answer your homework. Have a good day.

T. James

Here are my corrections:

I am not interested in games. 

>>> CORRECT

>>>Or: I am not interested in any games.

I don\'t know well about games.

>>> CORRECT

In korea, nowadays, computer games are occupaied by korean progamers.

>>> In Korea, nowadays, computer games are occupied by Korean Progamers. 

One of the games is \"suden attack \". i used to play the game. 

>>> One of the games is \"sudden attack \", I used to play the game. 

it was addictied of me. Compare to an old game, nowaday\'s game make us focuse on playing it. 

>>> It was addicted to me. Compared to an old game, nowadays game makes us focus on playing it..

Therefore, we can relieve stress easily.

>>> CORRECT


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