Are good family members or good friends more important? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher!
Are good family members or good friends more important? Why?
I need good friends for life.
I think good family are important.
Becuase family is based on responsibility and love.
Family connected all of mine.
So when I sick or too hard, my family would help me.
But we has comfortable and funny time with good friends.
I think it could feel emotional comfort to our lives.
강사 첨삭
You are right, Soolyn! They are important in our lives. I hope you always have fun with your family and friends!
-Faith-
Hi, teacher!>> CORRECT
Are good family members or good friends more important? Why?
>> CORRECT
I need good friends for life.
>> CORRECT
I think good family are important. Becuase family is based on responsibility and love.
>> I think having a good family is more important because family is based on responsibility and love.
I think good family are important. Becuase family is based on responsibility and love.
>> I think having a good family is more important because family is based on responsibility and love.
Family connected all of mine.
>> My family is connected with me.
So when I sick or too hard, my family would help me.
>> Therefore, when I get sick or have a hard time, my family will help me.
But we has comfortable and funny time with good friends.
So when I sick or too hard, my family would help me.
>> Therefore, when I get sick or have a hard time, my family will help me.
But we has comfortable and funny time with good friends.
>> However, we are comfortable and have a good time with good friends.
I think it could feel emotional comfort to our lives.
I think it could feel emotional comfort to our lives.
>> I think they could give emotional comfort to our lives.
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