Are holidays really relaxing? What stressful things are involved in going on holiday?

2016-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In the old days, men’s role was to bring bread home and feed their family. Even in ancient times, men went hunting to get food for their family, while women took care of their babies and house work, although there were some exceptional ethnic groups. In modern society, if you are married, your wife and children expect you to contribute your time to family. Men are expected to do some house chores on the weekends or holidays like cleaning the house, doing the dishes and laundry, and spend time for family like eating out or going shopping together. Today, men are not able to secure time only for themselves. Some men say that it’s better to go to work even on holidays because it is tiring and stressful to be forced to go somewhere and do something by their family. Holidays are not relaxing anymore. Men need time on holidays for themselves, not for family. Many men feel exhausted especially after long holidays. If you are single, a long holiday could be boring unless you have hobbies.

강사 첨삭

Happy hump day Sir [이름]! You are right. Men also need time for themselves. It is important to have some time to relax. Thank you for imparting your wonderful ideas. See you in class. Teacher Nina   In the old days, men’s role was to bring bread home and feed their family. >> correct Even in ancient times, men went hunting to get food for their family, while women took care of their babies and house work, although there were some exceptional ethnic groups. >> correct In modern society, if you are married, your wife and children expect you to contribute your time to family. >> correct Men are expected to do some house chores on the weekends or holidays like cleaning the house, doing the dishes and laundry, and spend time for family like eating out or going shopping together. >> correct Today, men are not able to secure time only for themselves. >> correct Some men say that it’s better to go to work even on holidays because it is tiring and stressful to be forced to go somewhere and do something by their family. >> correct Holidays are not relaxing anymore. >> correct Men need time on holidays for themselves, not for family. >> correct Many men feel exhausted especially after long holidays. >> correct If you are single, a long holiday could be boring unless you have hobbies. >> correct

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