Are home shopping networks on TV still popular in your country? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I still think home shopping networks on TV is popular in Korea. I think the two strategies worked well as a reason for their popularity.
First, because there\'s a major customer base that doesn\'t change.
Home shopping networks on TV is mainly based on people at home, but no matter how many double-income families increase, there are people at home, so there are still customers who can use home shopping networks on TV. In addition, the advantage of home shopping networks on TV is that you can see and purchase items promoted by TV at that time, and as the number of elderly people who cannot use digital increases, more users use home shopping networks on TV.
Second, because they choose a purchasing strategy that makes things easier and people feel cheaper than other methods.
If you check the TV channel and call, you can buy things, it is easier than other methods and promotes the purchase of items that were usually considered expensive at a low price.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Great job in expressing your answer. I also appreciate you for sharing the current standing of TV home shopping in your country.
I did some corrections to make the sentences better. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I still think home shopping networks on TV is popular in Korea.
>> Well, I still think home shopping networks on TV are popular in Korea.
I think the two strategies worked well as a reason for their popularity.
>> I think these two strategies have worked well and are the reason for their popularity.
First, because there\'s a major customer base that doesn\'t change.
>> CORRECT.
Home shopping networks on TV is mainly based on people at home, but no matter how many double-income families increase, there are people at home, so there are still customers who can use home shopping networks on TV.
>> Home shopping networks on TV mainly target people who stay at home. Even though the number of double-income families is increasing, there are still many people at home, so there are still customers who use TV home shopping.
In addition, the advantage of home shopping networks on TV is that you can see and purchase items promoted by TV at that time, and as the number of elderly people who cannot use digital increases, more users use home shopping networks on TV.
>> In addition, one advantage of TV home shopping is that you can watch products being introduced and purchase them immediately. Also, as the number of elderly people who cannot use the digital technology increases, more people continue to use TV home shopping.
Second, because they choose a purchasing strategy that makes things easier and people feel cheaper than other methods.
>> Second, because they choose a purchasing strategy that makes things easier and people feel cheaper than with other methods.
If you check the TV channel and call, you can buy things, it is easier than other methods and promotes the purchase of items that were usually considered expensive at a low price.
>> CORRECT.
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