Are humans too dependent on computers?

2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I think humans too dependent on computers. There are two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is that we can see computers anywhere in these days. We usually work with computers at the workplace. In my experience, most of professor usually give assignments that we should use computer such as power point. The second reason is that it is useful. Nowadays computers are really high tech, so we could search information quickly and get a lot of it. As a result, I think humans can not live without computers.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. I agree that humans are dependent on computers because everyone has access to the net nowadays. Anyway, enjoy your weekend!

~Kelly^^

I think humans too dependent on computers. There are two reasons to support my opinion.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that we can see computers anywhere in these days.

>> Correct.

We usually work with computers at the workplace.

>> We usually work with computers at workplace.

In my experience, most of professor usually give assignments that we should use computer such as power point.

>> In my experience, most professors usually give assignments through power point presentation.
The second reason is that it is useful.

>> Correct.

Nowadays computers are really high tech, so we could search information quickly and get a lot of it.

>> Nowadays, computers are really high tech, so we could search for information quickly and get a lot of it.
As a result, I think, humans cannot live without computers.

>> Correct

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