Are Koreans good at managing stress?
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I think that Koreans are better off managing stress. Because Koreans tend to set long-term goals due to various socio-cultural environments. Koreans seem to be trained to manage stress no matter how they manage it because they have to endure and overcome additional stress to achieve their long-term goals.
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I think that Koreans are better off managing stress.
>>> I think Koreans are better off in managing stress.
Because Koreans tend to set long-term goals due to various socio-cultural environments.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> Because we tend to set long-term goals due to various socio-cultural environments.
Koreans seem to be trained to manage stress no matter how they manage it because they have to endure and overcome additional stress to achieve their long-term goals.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> Koreans seem to be equipped in handling stress no matter how does it take because they have to live through the stress to achieve their lasting goals.
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