Are LGBTQs discriminated by Society in anyway?
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As to the conclusion, yes. They are.
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But not in explict way.
>> But not in an explicit way.
I mean,in Korea, a lots of Koreans are open-mined in Korea, and most of them think that discriminating someone is really immature behavior.
>> I mean, in Korea, a lot of Koreans are open-mined, and most of them think that discriminating someone is really an immature behavior.
Since we were discriminated by japanese in japanese colonial era.
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We know what is like to be alienated. So, you cannot blame for sexual identity plainly.
>> We know what it\'s like to be alienated. So, you cannot blame someone for their sexual identity plainly.
Well, of course, back in the day, like in other countries, older generations were not opened to gays.
>> Well, of course, back in the days, like in other countries, older generations were not opened to gays.
But there was once a big lawsuit that exclaims the right of gays to marry.
>> But there was once a big lawsuit that exclaims the right of gays to get married.
At that time the whole nation was shocked.
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Though that lawsuit, people\'s understanding of gay completely changed.
>> Through that lawsuit, people\'s understanding about gays were completely changed.
Now they understand that gay is biological issue, and we cannot \"fix\" it.
>> Now they understand that being a gay is a biological issue, and we cannot \"fix\" it.
And they aware that being gay is not wrong since it is identity.
>> And they are aware that being gay is not wrong since it is their identity.
Still, there are complex conflict between non-gays and gays.
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Because there are some gays who impose non-gays to change their sexual identity, and the \"LGBTQ\" parade is quite lewd and nasty.
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