Are men and women equal in ability and intelligence?
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I disagree with this topic.
>>I disagree with this idea or notion.
In my opinion, women and men both have different ability and natural talent each other.
>>In my opinion, women and men both have different ability and natural talent.
Everybody cannot get equal intelligence and ability even twin.
>>Everybody cannot have equal intelligence and ability even twin.
Some consist that men have more natural physical advance then women.
>>Some say men have more physical advance than women.
Other argues that women can come over doing exercise and practices.
>>Other argues that women can over come it by doing exercise.
In my opinion, of course the humen talent has difference each other. but people should not compare with women and men.
>>In my opinion, of course human talent has difference from each other. But people should not compare women and men from each other..
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