Are men and women equal in ability and intelligence?

2020-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t agree that men and women are equal in abilities and intelligence. I don\'t mean that it is superior to men than women. They have a specific realm they can do well respectively. I heard that men developed the right brain than women and women developed the left brain than men. Men can decide easily and don\'t care about many things thinking logically and narrowly. Otherwise, women diverge their thought and make other items to think. And they diverge as well. It makes them not concentrate on the original thought and just be involved in their feeling. This is why they can do well in specific areas for each other. Men are good at math and science so they tend to get jobs needed rational and analytic thinking. Women prefer to get jobs that required emotional and social skills. But I don\'t mean that people are categorized as their sex. In my opinion, they are equal in their ability even though having different abilities and intelligence.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for this! :)
Have a wonderful day and see you again tomorrow!

- T. Rina ^^


1. I don\'t agree that men and women are equal in abilities and intelligence. 
>> CORRECT!

2. I don\'t mean that it is superior to men than women. 
>> I don\'t mean that men are superior to women.

3. They have a specific realm they can do well respectively. 
>> There are specific areas that they do well in respectively.

4. I heard that men developed the right brain than women and women developed the left brain than men. 
>> I heard that men\'s right brains are more developed than women\'s and women\'s left brains are more developed than men\'s.

5. Men can decide easily and don\'t care about many things thinking logically and narrowly. 
>> CORRECT!

6. Otherwise, women diverge their thought and make other items to think. 
>> Otherwise, women diverge their thoughts and make other choices to consider.

7. And they diverge as well. 
>> CORRECT!

8. It makes them not concentrate on the original thought and just be involved in their feeling. 
>> It makes them not to concentrate on the original thoughts and just be involved in their feelings.

9. This is why they can do well in specific areas for each other. 
>> CORRECT!

10. Men are good at math and science so they tend to get jobs needed rational and analytic thinking. 
>> Men are good at Math and Science so they tend to get jobs that need rational and analytical thinking.

11. Women prefer to get jobs that required emotional and social skills. 
>> Women prefer to get jobs that require emotional and social skills.

12. But I don\'t mean that people are categorized as their sex. 
>> CORRECT!

13. In my opinion, they are equal in their ability even though having different abilities and intelligence.
>> In my opinion, they are equal in their abilities even though they have different strengths.

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