Are men better chefs than women or are women better chefs than men?

2022-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I do not discriminate between men and women in any profession. But, nowadays, you mainly can see men chefs on the TV screen. There are a lof of TV show about food in Korea. And The program is mostly male chefs. In fact, I don\'t like that kind of culture. When it comes to traditional food, women chafs are better than men.

강사 첨삭

Hello Charley!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I do not discriminate between men and women in any profession.

>> CORRECT!
But, nowadays, you mainly can see men chefs on the TV screen.

>> But, nowadays, you mainly can see male chefs on the TV screen.
There are a lof of TV show about food in Korea. And
>> There are a lot of TV shows about food in Korea.
The program is mostly male chefs.

>> The program is mostly about male chefs.
In fact, I don\'t like that kind of culture.

>> CORRECT!
When it comes to traditional food, women chafs are better than men.

>> When it comes to traditional food, female chefs are better than male chefs.

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