Are men better chefs than women or are women better chefs than men?
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Hello Charley!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I do not discriminate between men and women in any profession.
>> CORRECT!
But, nowadays, you mainly can see men chefs on the TV screen.
>> But, nowadays, you mainly can see male chefs on the TV screen.
There are a lof of TV show about food in Korea. And
>> There are a lot of TV shows about food in Korea.
The program is mostly male chefs.
>> The program is mostly about male chefs.
In fact, I don\'t like that kind of culture.
>> CORRECT!
When it comes to traditional food, women chafs are better than men.
>> When it comes to traditional food, female chefs are better than male chefs.
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