Are older people actually wiser? Why or why not?
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Are older people actually wiser? Why or why not?
In my opinion, it is true that older people wiser than younger people. These days, there is a popular word in Korea called the MZ generation. This word refers to people from the early 1990s to the early 2000s. I can see that younger people these days are really rude. I don’t know what makes them change to be rude or tackless. Lots of university students do the part time job. But according to some stories, they are really self-centered and don\'t work efficiently. In contrast, older people have their know-how to work faster and correctly. Also they have good patience rather than younger people. I hope many young people go in the right direction.
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Hi, Harry! :)
Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion about this matter.
It is true that we have a lot to learn from older people. Too bad, a lot of young people these days think that they\'re better.
I sincerely hope that the younger generation would do better than their predecessors.
I hope you\'re having a great day Harry!
See you again on Wednesday. ^_^
Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion about this matter.
It is true that we have a lot to learn from older people. Too bad, a lot of young people these days think that they\'re better.
I sincerely hope that the younger generation would do better than their predecessors.
I hope you\'re having a great day Harry!
See you again on Wednesday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
>> In my opinion, it is true that older people are wiser than younger people.
These days, there is a popular word in Korea called the MZ generation.
>> These days, there is a popular expression in Korea called the \"MZ generation\".
This word refers to people from the early 1990s to the early 2000s.
>> This expression refers to the people born in the early 1990s to the early 2000s.
I can see that younger people these days are really rude.
>> CORRECT!
I don’t know what makes them change to be rude or tackless.
>> I don\'t know what makes them act rude or tactless.
Lots of university students do the part time job.
>> Lots of university students do part-time jobs.
But according to some stories, they are really self-centered and don\'t work efficiently.
>> CORRECT!
In contrast, older people have their know-how to work faster and correctly.
>> CORRECT!
Also they have good patience rather than younger people.
>> Also, they are more patient as compared to younger people.
I hope many young people go in the right direction.
>> I hope many young people go to the right direction.
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