Are online dating sites just a scam? Why or why not?

2022-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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It is not only a scam it\'s because someones had online date, and they got marry themselves. Today many criminals are scamming from using online dating sites and victims get the rape or sexual assault so many people think online dating sites are just scam. But while this case, those sites are helping to other people like an earnest to marry.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Daisy. ^_^
I agree that online dating sites are not scams all the time. It\'s just that many people out there are bad and they use the dating sites a tool to do their crimes. 
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great. :)
See you again in class lager. ^^
~Teacher Charry

It is not only a scam it\'s because someones had online date, and they got marry themselves. 
>> It is not a scam all the time because some people who participated in online dating also got married. 
Today many criminals are scamming from using online dating sites and victims get the rape or sexual assault so many people think online dating sites are just scam. 
>> Today, many criminals are scamming using online dating sites and victims get raped or sexually assaulted so many people think online dating sites are just a scam. 
But while this case, those sites are helping to other people like an earnest to marry.
>> But while these cases take place, those sites still help other people get into an earnest marriage.

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